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Posy Churchgate's avatar

I’m overwhelmed! So erotic & the pacing was masterful- building up from tentative to full on submissive in the thrall of their lover. I agree with Simone that you got the delicate balance just right

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Sloan James's avatar

I swear my heart is going to explode! You two have made my whole year with your kind words.

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Steve's avatar

Sloan! You have such beautifully powerfully sensually written stories. I was on the edge of my seat reading this. Will you continue this story? 💛

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Sloan James's avatar

Thank you, Steve! Tell me, where would you like to see the story go? Or do you like surprises?

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Simone Francis's avatar

Nicely written - just the right balance of aggression and caring and submission and control. Very erotic

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Sloan James's avatar

Thank you so much, Simone. Your comment warms my soul. 😊

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Velvet Lure's avatar

Yes, Sir

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